Vision; I think you did a good job capturing the scene and creating a full image/setting for the reader
Originality; As far as originality goes, with fan-fiction you can only be so original as the setting. I give you five-of-five for originality because I've read a lot of Thorki, and I mean A TON, but I have yet to see one similar to this in setting and very rarely in quality.
Technique; For artist technique I've only given you a 3 because it's a writing, there's not much technique involved.
Impact; I think you did a freaking amazing job in your writing. period. no buts. IT WAS AMAZING.
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Originality; As far as originality goes, with fan-fiction you can only be so original as the setting. I give you five-of-five for originality because I've read a lot of Thorki, and I mean A TON, but I have yet to see one similar to this in setting and very rarely in quality.
Technique; For artist technique I've only given you a 3 because it's a writing, there's not much technique involved.
Impact; I think you did a freaking amazing job in your writing. period. no buts. IT WAS AMAZING.